Some people think dangerous sports should be banned while some others think peop7le should be free to choose. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Extreme sport such as hiking sking and surfing are becoming more popular in recent times. This has made some people to suggest that it should be banned as it causes severe disability or injury to participants, while some other persons are saying that individuals should be free to make a choice on sport to participate in.
Dangerous sport on one hand can lead to permanent disability and even death in people who indulge in it. Injuries sustained from such sporting activity often lead to long periods of Hospital stay as well as high financial cost of treatment. Additionally a lot of deaths are been reported from car racing and hiking in the media.Thus, making this form of sport unpopular among people who are advocating for a bann.
On the other hand a lot of people derive pleasure in watching or indulging in one form of dangerous sport or the other and some have even gone on to make a lucrative career out of it. In the same vein some countries have been able to generate a lot of income in tourism because of sport like this, as seen in the case of surfing in Hawaii.
In as much as, extreme sport is enjoyed and beneficial economically to some people and countries, it should not be encouraged as it has a negative impact on health and it has raised a lot of safety concerns , so it should be banned.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, thus, well, while, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1054.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56277056277 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56493415164 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532467532468 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 346.5 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.7533169162 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.75 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.875 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277058403709 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120621093499 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131136951166 0.0667982634062 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192404343675 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10458316823 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.76 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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