After XXth century people faced to a wide range of products.They have started choosing a significant products for themselves.But now we come across with different situations.The supply of goods exceed the demand of products.Producers introduce lots of products to us.
On the other hand,new items make our life easier.Using of smartphones or washing machines save our time,money and so forth.For example,we can pay credit debts,buy something whatever we want with modern technologies.
Moreover,unnecessary products make us busy.Every day we come across with significant number of posts,comments on social networks.These publications,products waste our time,deal our schedule and so on.
However,modern people have had a rampant consumerism.They do not have a critical thinking about meaningfulness of these products.For instance,people change their phones after they meet new model of phones.Doing unchecked consumerism caused anarchy of goods market,recession of governments,multinational companies and etc.
In some cases,companies polluted our environment.Why?Because using of minning, toxic chemicals for preparing new products may affect our nature harmfully.
Overall,introducing of unnecessary products should be regulated by governments.As well as consumer also should know their aim of his marketing and then supply and demand of products could be in a equlibrium point.
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...pply and demand of products could be in a equlibrium point.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, for example, for instance, as well as, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 5.60731707317 375% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 965.302439024 124% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 6.21875 4.92477711251 126% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.43627721807 2.65546596893 167% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 106.607317073 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.708333333333 0.547539520022 129% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.45097560976 131% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.1332183186 43.030603864 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 199.0 112.824112599 176% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 22.9334400587 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 21.0 5.23603664747 401% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 35.0 1.69756097561 2062% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0774266720658 0.215688989381 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0370963427174 0.103423049105 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301175957745 0.0843802449381 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0370963427174 0.15604864568 24% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301175957745 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.9 13.2329268293 181% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 13.62 61.2550243902 22% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 10.3012195122 187% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.39 11.4140731707 170% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.23 8.06136585366 139% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 40.7170731707 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 11.4329268293 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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