The author has given an argument where a study on green tea has been done with respect ro its effectiveness on health and side effects of its excess consumption. Here in the argument the author concludes that one should limit their intake to no more than two cups. But in the argument, there are many hidden assumption which author has considered and drwan this conclusion. We need proper evidences to prove this assumption true.
First, consumption of anything in excess can be all but harmful for health. I agree that the benifits of green tea is huge and can help in many aspects. But we cannot just generalize that intaking more than two cups will have negetive effect on our body. It depends from person to person. For example, the intake depend on the person weight, size and the age. Even i drink 3-4 cups of green tea everyday i have seen the positive effects of it. So concluding that more than 2 cups of green tea per day is not good with providing a proper evidence is less convincing.
Futhermore, the author mentioned that the study has shown that those who drinl more that 3 cups per day can suffer with symptoms similar to those of coffee drinkers. But here the author does not any details about the study. For example, the study may have been done on some limited age range or similar gender or group of people with similar disease. May be the study was done only on few people. We need more details about the study to support the conclusion otherwise the conclusion may fail if the exmples given above hold true.
Finally, green tea is way different from coffee. The amount of caffine in these two differs by a huge precentage. And also the green tea taken from different place may not have the same percentage of caffine in it. The study also fails to provide the details about the green tea which was considered to perform this study. For example,. the green tea from South korea may have high amount of caffine than that of India. So a person from India can consume more than 2 grean tea without having any negetive effects whereas in South korea, one should less than 3 cups per day. The absence of this details in the study has weaked the argument.
In the end, the argument has missed many important evidences which must be considered before making the conclusion.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: The author has given an argument where a study on green tea has been done with respect ro its effectiveness on health and side effects of its excess consumption.
Error: ro Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Here in the argument the author concludes that one should limit their intake to no more than two cups.
Error: intake Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: But in the argument, there are many hidden assumption which author has considered and drwan this conclusion.
Error: drwan Suggestion: drawn
Sentence: I agree that the benifits of green tea is huge and can help in many aspects.
Error: benifits Suggestion: benefits
Sentence: But we cannot just generalize that intaking more than two cups will have negetive effect on our body.
Error: intaking Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: negetive Suggestion: negative
Sentence: Futhermore, the author mentioned that the study has shown that those who drinl more that 3 cups per day can suffer with symptoms similar to those of coffee drinkers.
Error: drinl Suggestion: drink
Sentence: We need more details about the study to support the conclusion otherwise the conclusion may fail if the exmples given above hold true.
Error: may Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: exmples Suggestion: examples
Sentence: The amount of caffine in these two differs by a huge precentage.
Error: precentage Suggestion: percentage
Error: caffine Suggestion: caffeine
Sentence: And also the green tea taken from different place may not have the same percentage of caffine in it.
Error: may Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: caffine Suggestion: caffeine
Sentence: For example,. the green tea from South korea may have high amount of caffine than that of India.
Error: ,. Suggestion: an
Error: may Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: caffine Suggestion: caffeine
Error: korea Suggestion: fore
Sentence: So a person from India can consume more than 2 grean tea without having any negetive effects whereas in South korea, one should less than 3 cups per day.
Error: negetive Suggestion: negative
Error: grean Suggestion: great
Error: korea Suggestion: fore
Sentence: The absence of this details in the study has weaked the argument.
Error: weaked Suggestion: No alternate word
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 15 2
No. of Sentences: 24 15
No. of Words: 411 350
No. of Characters: 1838 1500
No. of Different Words: 187 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.503 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.472 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.209 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 111 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 74 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 42 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 27 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.125 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.418 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.583 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.308 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.51 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.135 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 309, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'assumptions'?
Suggestion: assumptions
... in the argument, there are many hidden assumption which author has considered and drwan t...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 366, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e person weight, size and the age. Even i drink 3-4 cups of green tea everyday i ...
^
Line 5, column 356, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (May) must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...oup of people with similar disease. May be the study was done only on few people. ...
^^
Line 7, column 335, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...dered to perform this study. For example,. the green tea from South korea may have...
^^
Line 7, column 338, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...ed to perform this study. For example,. the green tea from South korea may have hig...
^^^
Line 7, column 590, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ess than 3 cups per day. The absence of this details in the study has weaked the arg...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, so, whereas, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.6327345309 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.9520958084 124% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 13.6137724551 95% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 28.8173652695 97% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 55.5748502994 92% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 16.3942115768 67% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1889.0 2260.96107784 84% => OK
No of words: 411.0 441.139720559 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59610705596 5.12650576532 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.56307096286 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29428907299 2.78398813304 82% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 204.123752495 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469586374696 0.468620217663 100% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 705.55239521 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59920159681 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.76447105788 103% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.67365269461 239% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 19.7664670659 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.8473053892 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9583161854 57.8364921388 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7083333333 119.503703932 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.125 23.324526521 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.70786347227 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.25449101796 114% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.67664670659 235% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197213216443 0.218282227539 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580338554436 0.0743258471296 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582023677784 0.0701772020484 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105600669062 0.128457276422 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628695921679 0.0628817314937 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 14.3799401198 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 48.3550499002 147% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 12.197005988 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 12.5979740519 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 8.32208582834 83% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 98.500998004 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.1389221557 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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