Has human harmed the earth or made it a better place?
Although the quality of life has improved over the past decades due to new technologies advances but the damage to the earth weight more. As far as i m concerned, human have create a damage in various ways like pollution,global warming and depletes the natural resources.
First of all, human with the increase in the advances in transportation and factories has create a lot of pollution. Driving the pump of waste tunnels into the river also creates a pollution in natural resources. For example, numbers of buses and trains cause the air and noise pollution which in return harms the nature. Though the factory has given a high stander to people and has reduce the unemployment rate but it has arise the problem of pollution in environment. It has also cause global warming which is a critical problem that the nature is facing in today's time.
Additionally, due to the production of carbon dioxide in the nature has increase the global warming. Global warming is a harmful and most sensitive problem that the world is facing now. For example, global warming has increase the temperature of the earth and also cause the hole in the stratosphere which allow the harmful rays of sun to fall on earth. These harmful rays of sun cause skin problem to people and effects the photosynthesis rate of plants. If this problem of global warming does not reduce than it will create a huge debacle to nature.
Finally, the depletion of natural resources is a another problem the nature is facing by human. Resources like petrol,oil and minerals are degrade in nature. Excessive use of these resources has cause reduce the amount of these resources and are now in extinction rate. Cutting the tree, killing animals for the benefits of human has cause adverse effects on nature. For an instance, killing of elephant for ivory,meat and body parts. Also other animals for furs has create disrupts in food chain of the nature.
In conclusion, human has damage the earth for foods,shelter,enjoyment and in comforting theirs basic needs. Earth has slowly deteriorate nature through its behavior and advances in technologies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use past participle here: 'created'.
Suggestion: created
...re. As far as i m concerned, human have create a damage in various ways like pollution...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'damage'.
Suggestion: damage
...far as i m concerned, human have create a damage in various ways like pollution,global w...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , global
... a damage in various ways like pollution,global warming and depletes the natural resour...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'created'.
Suggestion: created
...ces in transportation and factories has create a lot of pollution. Driving the pump of...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'pollution'.
Suggestion: pollution
...ste tunnels into the river also creates a pollution in natural resources. For example, numb...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'reduced'.
Suggestion: reduced
... given a high stander to people and has reduce the unemployment rate but it has arise ...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'arisen'.
Suggestion: arisen
...reduce the unemployment rate but it has arise the problem of pollution in environment...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'caused'.
Suggestion: caused
...f pollution in environment. It has also cause global warming which is a critical prob...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ects the photosynthesis rate of plants. If this problem of global warming does not...
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Suggestion: , oil
...s facing by human. Resources like petrol,oil and minerals are degrade in nature. Exc...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'degraded'.
Suggestion: degraded
...ources like petrol,oil and minerals are degrade in nature. Excessive use of these resou...
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Suggestion: , meat
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...elephant for ivory,meat and body parts. Also other animals for furs has create disru...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'created'.
Suggestion: created
... parts. Also other animals for furs has create disrupts in food chain of the nature. ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , shelter
...on, human has damage the earth for foods,shelter,enjoyment and in comforting theirs basi...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'deteriorated'.
Suggestion: deteriorated
...ng theirs basic needs. Earth has slowly deteriorate nature through its behavior and advance...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, so, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 43.0788530466 28% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1767.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 354.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99152542373 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84534520559 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468926553672 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 560.7 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.6063956855 48.9658058833 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.35 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138631181779 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441901986277 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047000846903 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0884697864703 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400835126836 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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