Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The content of advertising in a particular country can tell you a lot about that country. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Advertisement is one of the basements of companies to sell their product, however advertisement is different according to the country. In my opinion, advertisement is another tool to gain information about the country who is broadcasting it.
First, advertising is a marketing technic for companies to promote their products which answer to a society’s need. Indeed, companies create a product or a service in order to satisfy consumers ‘need or willing otherwise the product would not be sold.
According to the country, advertisement will be more or less develop: for example, the advertisement can be broadcast through newspaper or technological device and therefore indicates the level of development of the country. Consequently, advertisement reflects the economic situation of a country.
Moreover, advertising highlights customs of country. For example, United states are an important consumer of Coca-Cola or Mc Donald’s, which reflects the habits of consumption of the population and explains why there are so many diabetic people in this country. When people are travelling abroad and they turn on TV, they can watch advertisement of a company that is also advertising in their own country. Nevertheless, the advertisement would not be the same in this foreign country because the company will have made a market study and a social survey to broadcast an advertisement that sticks to the country’s custom and behaviors.
Finally, advertisement underlines the social behaviors about a country. Indeed, advertisement development of social applications to find love which has modified the way people interact with each other shows the new social habits of a society. If people see this kind of advertisement in the street, they will know that these applications are part of the society and they will adapt their behaviors by applying a new norm.
To conclude, advertisement can afford knowledge about society’s need, economic situation of a country as well as customs and social habits of the country which is broadcasting this advertisement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, for example, kind of, as well as, in my opinion, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.0752688172 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1774.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 319.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56112852665 4.8611393121 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38247855161 2.67179642975 127% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498432601881 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 543.6 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6322274299 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.714285714 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0714285714 5.45110844103 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160284596982 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742878153368 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381143861489 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980658446692 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335678835575 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 11.7677419355 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 10.9000537634 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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