The illustration shows changes and distributions in meadowside village and foton from 1962 to now over three different time periods.
In 1962 meadowside was a small village located far from of fonton city. In this year a narrow road existed through the village.
As you can see between 1962 and 1985 some especial centers like super-store, leisure complex and housing estate established in this rural area and it expanded sharply. Additionally, between these two periods of time a transportation road has been constructed between meadowside and fonton and old road in this village became wider. Actually, in 1985 there was a considerable growth in the size of village and by this changes the village located in vicinity of fonton.
According to map, now there are some strategic centers between meadowside and fonton. During the years between 1985 and now a train station has been made in the left side of the transportation road between village and foton. Also a hotel has been built near train station. In the right side of transportation road there is a business park. It is obvious that by creating these centers, a significant expanding has been happened there and actually meadowside and foton merged together.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...le growth in the size of village and by this changes the village located in vicinity...
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Line 4, column 225, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...rtation road between village and foton. Also a hotel has been built near train stati...
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Line 4, column 457, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n happened there and actually meadowside and foton merged together.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1022.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84167204301 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9044681639 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9090909091 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1818181818 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45454545455 5.23603664747 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294877815073 0.215688989381 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108152131575 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0932436276352 0.0843802449381 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194744526222 0.15604864568 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596246454443 0.0819641961636 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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