The table below shows information about travelling to work in one US city.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table shows the information of using several means of transport to go office in one city in the US by inhabitants.
Overall, both of car and bus/train occupies the farthest way to work. Also, they need the longest time and the highest speed during the journey.
Car, bus and train are the means of transport which takes the longest distance with 24 and 23 each. Car with only one person reaches 17 miles to office. In different case, car, bus and train also take the longest time commuting with 42 and 49. The next longest time in the journey is car which only works with 33 minutes. However, the highest speed is car with several passengers, and car with only driver inside. Then, bus and train are in the next average speed with 28 mph.
However, cyclist and pedestrian have the shortest journey with only 4 miles. They also take the fastest time with only 20 minutes to work. Their speed also takes the slowest with just 10 and 3 mph each.
It can be conclude that means of transport which has machine takes the farthest journey with the longest time and the highest speed during the journey from home to work.
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