The dominance of human beings over other species on the earth, which can be reflected by the fact that people have completely changed the world over the past hundreds of years, mostly relies on the continuing evolvement of technology. Does technology always bring good consequences? People hardly can say yes. Indeed, a growing number of people begin to realize that they are not as happy or satisfied as before. From where I stand, I support this point of view and elaborate my reasons in the following essay.
At first blush, I have to concede that a variety of technologies invented by scientists and experts who have devoted themselves to the study of their field have greatly changed our society. First and foremost, the improvement of transportation makes it possible for people to travel to farther places. For supporting instances, one needs to look no further than the advent of the high-speed bullet train, which enables people in rural areas to spend about only one hour to move to the nearest metropolis. Besides, fruits and vegetables now have better quality thanks to the advancement of agricultural techniques. A trend of imbibing nutrients needed by humans from organic food has emerged among the rich. It is not hard to imagine that having a better standard of living, people become happier and more satisfied.
Notwithstanding the evidence of improving techniques, it is too hasty to conclude that people enjoy their lives in the contemporary world more than in the past. The first reason undermining this idea is the fierce competition. To get a competitive edge over their peers, when at school, young people are required to learn theories related to their majors, write papers, make presentations, and do experiments. They also have to seize an opportunity for an internship so as to gain practical experience. In addition, having a position after graduation does not mean that they are not obliged to study anymore. In fact, a vast majority of people attend a training school after daily work in order to gain the essential knowledge of state-of-the-art technologies and necessary skills, which further aggravate their burden. Understandably, compared to the society in the past where competition was less intensive, current world make people less satisfied.
Worse still, with environmental problems drawing more attention than before, the feelings of people about their lives become worse. First, due to the rapid growth of the industry, growing is the number of vehicles which has polluted the air by producing a huge amount of carbon dioxide and other toxic gas. In cities where the air is heavily polluted, people have to wear a mask every day. Second, water sources of many countries have been contaminated by industries which directly dumped their waste into rivers without any treatment. As a consequence, water downstream is undrinkable, aggravating the problem of freshwater availability. Therefore, people turn to be less satisfied with their environment.
To sum up, in spite of a higher standard of living improved by technologies, the quickly changing world worsen the feeling of people about their lives in large part by causing fierce competition and deteriorating their environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 468, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... seize an opportunity for an internship so as to gain practical experience. In addition,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, look, second, so, still, therefore, as to, in addition, in fact, in spite of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 91.0 52.1666666667 174% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2715.0 1977.66487455 137% => OK
No of words: 519.0 407.700716846 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23121387283 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7730044521 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93971540013 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 297.0 212.727598566 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57225433526 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 839.7 618.680645161 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6492731309 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.6 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.76 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254281660336 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067234613218 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665011492391 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140943962884 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378880597935 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 145.0 86.8835125448 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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