In recent few years, there was a widespread debate on whether traveling within own country is more beneficial than traveling to a foreign country or not. Personally, I think exploring different foreign countries has more advantage. I feel this way because of three main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
Traveling to different nation provides more knowledge. The more people travel around the world, the more they learn about the different culture. Each country has its own culture, so it will be a great opportunity to explore it and feed the curiosity. My own experience is a compelling example of this. I used to travel only within my country Saudi Arabia. Almost all the cities share the same culture that I have in my own city. However, recently I have visited three different countries which are the U.S., Sri Lanka, and the Maldives. I can tell that I really learn a lot of information about their culture and lifestyle. The freedom in the U.S, the food in Sri Lanka, and the dance in the Maldives. If I had not traveled to all of these countries, I would not have learned about their interesting culture.
In addition, traveling to different countries increase menu. In other words, I learned how to cook different type of foods that I added them to my diet. I used to eat only rice with chicken or meat every day. That it is mainly because it is our traditional food. Now, I eat rice only 3 times per week. Yesterday, I had a burger with French fries ( Texas Style ) I learned from Michael who is a chief for Holton Hotel in Dallas. Last Friday, I ate chicken curry with bread, it was delicious especially because I brought the spices from Sri Lanka. Finally, Sub Marine, it is a sandwich that contains vegetable mix with chicken and white sauce. I remember that I ate in Mali airport.
Frankly speaking, it is true that sometimes that traveling within your country differ a little bit in style. But when you look to the big picture, you will see that all middle eastern have the same culture. Americans have a similar culture, and each country is different than the other. Therefore, I think traveling to a different area in the world is better.
To conclude, I strongly believe that traveling to a different country has different advantageous that just traveling within yours. this is because you will not only learn about different cultures but also you will learn new things and add it to your life like food.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, frankly, however, if, look, really, so, therefore, i feel, i think, in addition, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2024.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 430.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70697674419 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56622822681 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 635.4 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4804284783 48.9658058833 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.2857142857 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3571428571 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53571428571 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.88709677419 307% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270461135639 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716973418776 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578652714039 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156393075154 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418676317834 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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