The reading passage and the lecture are both about the life existence on the planets like: Venus, compare to it by the Earth life possibility. The article explains about the impossibility of occurrence of human life on that planet, Venus. While, the professor casts doubt on the claims made in the article. He states that, by sending the balloon craft space to the Venus, supports the living requirements.
Firstly, the author mentions that environmental pressure have a huge difference among these two planets, such as: Earth is 90 times shorter pressure of the atmosphere then the Venus. So the spaceships would crush out and no functioning will maintaining there. However, the lecturer says that, by introducing the balloon craft device, it could possible to set the pressure about 50 times and will lead to go in managing the life exist-ency
Secondly, the writer contends that, human life is controlling by the essentials elements like: water and oxygen and thus, on this planet, no reservoir is present on the surface. In turn, the speaker rebuts this argument, he describes that, the craft device is design for this purpose, so that, they can create the environment, waster and oxygen, regulate their supply, would contribute the human life there.
Lastly, the articles suggests that, it is really necessary to attain the energy by solar system, but, due to cloud coverage, permits only 40 percent of the light to the Venus and also, many thick layer of carbon-di-oxide is present there. on the other hand, the professor posits that, thin type of cloud is presently cause the reflection, so no more reflection is occurring during this and it is turn, can maintain by the space balloon craft device.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 240, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ce of human life on that planet, Venus. While, the professor casts doubt on the claim...
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Line 7, column 240, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...er of carbon-di-oxide is present there. on the other hand, the professor posits th...
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Line 7, column 318, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'caused'.
Suggestion: caused
...s that, thin type of cloud is presently cause the reflection, so no more reflection i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, really, second, secondly, so, then, thus, while, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 30.3222958057 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1373.03311258 104% => OK
No of words: 284.0 270.72406181 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03873239437 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64641431534 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 145.348785872 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566901408451 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 419.366225166 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 21.2450331126 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.5250821194 49.2860985944 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.1 110.228320801 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4 21.698381199 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3 7.06452816374 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265762360524 0.272083759551 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102297981503 0.0996497079465 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380189966293 0.0662205650399 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154162856136 0.162205337803 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00905698293838 0.0443174109184 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.3589403974 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 53.8541721854 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.0289183223 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.2367328918 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.42419426049 112% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 63.6247240618 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.498013245 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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