In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, children engaged in paid work is a practice followed by many countries around the world. There are various controversial arguments among folks regarding this practice. In my opinion there are benefits as well as drawbacks associated with this practice.
Generally, working can be regarded as a process of training yourself at different levels of circumstances. Life long experience, team working skills, time management are some of the strategies acquired from early employment. In many schools children are encouraged to participate in paid work due to the benefits associated with this ...
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