Economic development is the prime task of every country in this modern era. It adds to improve the standards of living of society, which could be at the expense of social culture. Nevertheless, great leaders are now invoking this topic of economic growth more than ever for the betterment of their nations.
With higher standards of living comes higher economic growth, with more world power. Improving lifetsyles of individuals should be the basic right. For instance, economic growth via bulding more over bridges to improve traffic situations, improving public transportations through metro services could be beneficial to the growth of a country. Recently USA has decided to accomplish the tier system of roads through tunelling underground, not only does this add to divert traffic issues it also creates faster modes to reach farther off destinations. In India, the recent monetary change has added a replacement to the cash system, making India cashless and more digitilised than ever. In Saudi Arabia recent laws for economic development via excessive taxing of expatriates have added advantage to increase the living standards of locals by providing more job oppurtunities.
With great development comes great responsibility to maintain it. Economic development is never reached without taxing the common man, increasing expenses with hurling prices have always been the route to encash the expensess of the development. Social values are always depleted , for instance recent progress in saudi arabia towards a modernised islam, have made islamic values in younger generations obsolete. In KSA, with the introduction of dancing in public and recent looseing of previous stringent laws have made youth less cultured and more westernised than before.
Increasing standard of living should be via producing more professionals in society, increasing scholarships and generating government based loans for tertiary education. Social culture should be preserved for future generations as this marks the image of country's pride. Above all, individuals should work together to attain a developed nation whilst preserving societial values.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, nevertheless, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1825.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63271604938 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88830492252 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2688041286 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0625 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216669993903 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727657334524 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595816334618 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136400180053 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619174780036 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.43 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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