Do you agree or disagree with this statement: "It is more beneficial to travel to your own country than to travel to a foreign country." Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
When it comes to whether to travel abroad or take domestic trips, many may prefer the former. That foreign tours can provide people with long-lasting memories makes them ideal choices to some. Nevertheless, I strongly believe that enjoying holidays in our own countries brings us more benefits.
Concerning convenience, staycations are much easier to take. With international adventures, we are supposed to consider seriously about paper problems such as passports or visas which take us months to apply for. Also, big gaps in climate and food between our country and the place we are coming to are other huge challenges, possibly hampering us from immensely enjoying our vacations. Besides, languages and currency are still severe limitations to many while travelling abroad. Nevertheless, those are not any case of locally travelling. Through internal tours, we ought not to worry about food allergy or language barriers. Further, as we are travelling closer to home, we can easily fit our trips around our current work schedules by dedicating our weekends or holiday allowance to the trips. Additionally, domestic trips are not only good opportunities for us to visit and reconnect with our relatives and long-lost friends but our occasions to make friend with new people living nearby.
Speaking of finance, local travels make feasible our affordable trips. To venture abroad, we are assumed to spend an enormous sum of money on paper procedures of passports and visas. Moreover, expensive airfares and fluctuating exchange rates can be counted as other obstacles. In other words, these are typical fees considerably eating up our budgets on foreign travelling, resulting in a financial restriction on what we can enjoy during our journeys. Conversely, with the same amount of money, since we do not have to spend on such things above, we are able to experience as much as we can via staycations. We could come to more places, enjoy more specialities, and drag more time on our adventures. Moreover, as a native in our own land, we will not be caught out by any tourist traps charging us excess fees or admission.
Regarding culture, many proponents of international vacations may argue that travelling abroad offer us opportunities to discover different cultures. However, this is not always true. Actually, it is domestic trips that allow us to learn much about our own cultural values, and cherish more the place where we are living. Through locally travelling, we get good chances to experience countless food species, various customs, and numerous beauty spots within our nation. Also, we probably rediscover places we have visited when we were younger, and share our childhood memories with our children.
Briefly, staycations are always perfect choices to people who love to discover the beauty of their own land. Taking holidays in our country not only supplies us with obvious convenience but affordable prices to pay for.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 67, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun may seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much may', 'a good deal of may'.
Suggestion: much may; a good deal of may
...o travel abroad or take domestic trips, many may prefer the former. That foreign tours c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, briefly, but, conversely, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, so, still, while, speaking of, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2482.0 1977.66487455 126% => OK
No of words: 472.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25847457627 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6610686524 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82723346513 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 270.0 212.727598566 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572033898305 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 769.5 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1133593707 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.28 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.88 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.32 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0894649344678 0.236089414692 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0314655180687 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0240066364024 0.0737576698707 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0666148153533 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230015482 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 139.0 86.8835125448 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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