Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Parents today are more involved in their children's education than were parents in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Parents today are more involved in their children's education than were parents in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Submitted by simonwin on Sat, 11/03/2018 - 07:50

Children's education has always been an important task to parents. Parents nowadays

have more ways to take part in children's life. I stronglly agree the statement that parents are involved in children's

education than the old days. I list some reasons as below.

First and foreall, it is easier for parents to contact with school in nowadays. With the development of computer and mobile phone,

parents can communicate with teachers more often. They can ask the problems for children's homework or give advice to the school activities whenever

they have concern. Take my neighbor as example, he uses LINE to reflect his child's studying problem to teachers whenever he is worried. However, in the past,

most parents communicate with teacher by the papaer notes. It limit the interaction between parents and school.

Secondly, parents nowadays have more information than before. Currently, parents can search for advice via the internet or listen to the speech

that is relative to education. Parents can use the idea from the internet to coach their children. Take my uncle for example, he always looks up the ways

for learning English at the internet. When he gets the advices, he uses as part of the learning material for my cousin. However, in the past, there are

not that much of resoures for parents to arrange.

To sum up, with the highly communication method and the abundant of resources, nowadays parents tend to involve to their children's education more than before.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, for example, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1977.66487455 64% => OK
No of words: 244.0 407.700716846 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19672131148 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57981955957 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 212.727598566 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536885245902 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 618.680645161 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6850829921 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5882352941 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3529411765 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11764705882 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.53405017921 265% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287914977687 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109924534047 0.076458572812 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872755338375 0.0737576698707 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126039579332 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708712201152 0.0645574589148 110% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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