However, many people still being able to complete their works by just hands. I believe that machines completely can regulate those works with better superiority and spend short period of time. In this essay, i will discuss reasons and examples to support my point of view.
To begin with, Machines totally can regulate those works better than human. Even the man brainy men whose are able to calculate immediately many equations in their head and, then, quickly answer the question, will never be simple computer or a calculator. Therefore, several positions related with mathematics such as accountants, scientists and engineers will certainly perform faster and more precise by using, at least, the computer and calculator. Moreover, using such calculators always give the right mathematical answer.
Second, Machines can work neater than people. Although, people look very neat and so attractive or charismatic that it is always so beautiful that it does not always mean that, and plus, machines even look dirty or dusty also it is the same. If you want to write a few letters by hand, it probably become a little bit messy. If you type your letters using by computer, it is obviously going to have clean and efficiency. There is no matter how your computer and you look like.
Third, present-day machines support the creativity of people. Machines are becoming more and more professional or perfect. Many ideas and feature and some equipment can be added, altered or removed, easily by using the computers. What this means is that people have no doubt use the machines or computers which are able to support the development of people.
In conclusion, i suggest that people, if possible, use machines and technologies to perform their work because they will finish it faster, neater and better than to work in hands.
- Games are as important for adults as they are for children. 60
- The widespread use of the internet has given people access to information on a level never experienced before. How does this increase in the availability of information influence life in today's world? 100
- some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. what is your opinion? 60
- Some people like doing work by hand. Others prefer using machines. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- Some people like doing work by hand. Others prefer using machines. 76
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, moreover, second, so, still, then, therefore, third, at least, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 301.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06644518272 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61077996142 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578073089701 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.5464550808 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7058823529 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7058823529 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94117647059 5.45110844103 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0662057780833 0.236089414692 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0216681322112 0.076458572812 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0218174181314 0.0737576698707 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0386866173163 0.150856017488 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00973324115282 0.0645574589148 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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