Is life nowadays easier than it was when your grandparents were kids?
Technology has is been growing very fast and changing which is changed people’s life drastically over the in last decadtes. As technologies are developing, people’s life is becoming more comnfortable. I do agree with the idea that human life is far easier and more comfortable now compared with the last century. I am going to support my opinion by giving examples and reasons why it is much easaier to live now.
First of all, At first, technologies allow s people to avoid from heavy phyisical works which is a big advantage and comfort. As an example, I can tell a story of my grand mother who hadve to bring water home from a natural spring to home four or five 4 or 5 times during the day. Along Together with this, the spring was very far from home and it was very heavy work to do, but there was no other way back thean. In contrast, now people can open the tap and get water as much as they want.
The Second point is communications and social activities. Nowadays internet is available for everyone which is great tool for education, networking and so on. I can write my friends and they will receieve the message in couple of seconds. I heard from my father that they need to wait up to one month to get letter from other country which is seem very strange for us.
Last and most important reason why people life is much comfortable now is that we have unlimited opportunities to have successiful life and make good carrier. Unfortunately Unfortunatelly that was extreamely hard back thean because of technical problems. For instance, my father does not know chemistry well because of their chemistry teacher was bad and there was no choicse to have select a new chemistry teacher. In contrast, now I can have chemistry classes whenever and wherever I want, be it face to face or online. All these that problems comes from the lack luck of materials and information back then.
In conclusion, it is obvious that technology and sciencse helps people to make their life more comfortable and easiery. This is why I do believfe that from one year to another each year life is becoming much more interesting and easier.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2018-11-06 | Gayane Tadevosyan | 70 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 238, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...water home from a natural spring to home four or five 4 or 5 times during the day...
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Line 3, column 343, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'seemed'.
Suggestion: seemed
... get letter from other country which is seem very strange for us. Last and most imp...
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Line 4, column 537, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'problems'' or 'problem's'?
Suggestion: problems'; problem's
... face to face or online. All these that problems comes from the lack luck of materials a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, then, well, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66402116402 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70964696389 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550264550265 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.1304834605 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.7894736842 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8947368421 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94736842105 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113956404895 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0337088404286 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346646029104 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0643617311944 0.150856017488 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258030546345 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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