Working hours today are too long and people are not spending as much time as they should with their families or on leisure activities. What is your opinion on this?
Hardly a day goes by without the subject of working hours. Nowadays, it is very popular to be workaholic, since this can bring you a lot of money. However, I am absolutely sure, that out society have to work for its own future generations. For my opinion, we have to work, because we do not know what can be happened in the future, but for the other hand we also should find a time to take a rest to not to be mad after 10 years of non stop working.
Today, most of us live in huge cities, which are widespread for kilometers. That is why people have to spend almost all day in traffic jams, on tube for commuting. For example, having conducted a research among people from Japan, scientists have revealed that 70 % of them spend more than 5 hours on the streets to get to the jobs. After long working day, people got tired and can not have a talk with their own families.
Also, a lot of people know that they must work to feed the children, to save money for a rainy day. You need sacrifice your own interests and hobbies to get more money, do not made redundant. It is quite often that people go to the job which they are literally hate. For example, in 2017 it was reported in New York Times that every third man do not like his job.
Taking everything in account, it must be said that our society has become workaholic and we should change it as soon as possible to save us and our families.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The adverb 'Hardly' is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
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Line 5, column 262, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'hated'.
Suggestion: hated
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, third, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1137.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.24253731343 5.12529762239 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26831607247 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611940298507 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8792290102 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4615384615 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19681864652 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643809435848 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041491883687 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100613632733 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482821767054 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.31 12.4159519038 59% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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