Although you have never studied computing, you have always been interested in computers – you buy magazines about them, and you have taught yourself many skills on your computer at home. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have studied computing at college or university.
Write a letter to the Enrollment Officer asking if you can enroll, explaining your circumstances and asking if he/she will make a special exception for you.
Dear Officer,
I am John Gresham, a resident of East Ham, London, who has been a computer enthusiast right from my schooling. I am writing this letter to seek the possibility of enrolling into the course.
The advertisement snippet about the training session mentions that the course open only for students and graduates with a computer background either at college or university level. Though my keen interest at school was computers, I was not able to pursue secondary education owing to my family’s financial situation.
Nevertheless, my deep desire towards programming has always been alive and in a way motivated me to read books and articles on intriguing concepts of cloud technologies. I have been a freelancer since 2010 taking up assignments and projects from a wide range of clientele, receiving a positive feedback.
My urge to pursue to AWS course arises from the fact that the session is conducted by well renowned programmer Mr. Ram who has been a game changer in cloud industry. Hence, I request you to allow me to sign up for the course, based on my real-time experience.
I would be delighted if an exception can be made based on my situation. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
John Gresham
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, nevertheless, second, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1047.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08252427184 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98392099805 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679611650485 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1279386999 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1818181818 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150856975854 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443442364055 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312749188708 0.0603063233224 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0630528771904 0.12726935374 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291802442697 0.0580467560999 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.