“Some people prefer to spend most of their time alone. Others like to be with friends most of the time.”
There are different ways of spending our leisure time; some people like to spend their free time with friends whereas some loves to stay alone. Different people may have different opinions regarding spending their free time: however, I would prefer to spend my vacant time alone rather being in with friends. Although, the friends have important role to achieve success in life, while talking about spending my spare time I would love to spend it doing things of my interest being home.
First of all, I have very busy schedule throughout the week working for the organization I am involved. I find time at the end of the week to do things of my own interest. I love to paly loud music, play guitar and play video games when I will be free. For doing all these stuffs I don’t need my friends and I enjoy doing all these things being alone in my home. If I spend my weekend being with friends I cannot have access to all these things. Likewise, nothing can recreate and entertain me unless I do things of my own interest. So, this will add more energy on me to work with full desperation at office next day. In addition, if I spend time my with friends on weekend I won’t be able to spend time with my family, this will bring distance among family members and I have to give detailed explanation to other members about my visit to friends. Hence, I love to be home, do things of my interest and spend my every minute with my family.
Second, I love to study and for me to study no other places will be better than my home because I will have all the materials around me. Also, I would have laptop and internet with me if I need to do some research while studying. Likewise, if I feel hungry while studying I can go to the kitchen and eat whatever is available. So, I can save my dollars as well. Furthermore, to study everyone needs peace environment which one can get in home. There are some other places as well like libraries, parks but for me home is the best among all. There will be no any noises and hence I can have full concentration on the subject I am studying. On other hand, if I want to study while being with friend I cannot fully concentrate because I have to listen him whatever he says. Sometimes I might have to join him to help what else he will be doing. For instance, during the time of under graduation thesis preparation, we had worked in a group and was very difficult to deal with four peoples’ ideas at once, we were contradicting in what to put and what not to. So, I don’t have to contradict and refute others’ ideas and I can even save the time which I require to clear concept to my friend about the topic being discussed, if I work alone.
In conclusion, taking into account all the points that I have mentioned above, everyone has their own way of spending their spare time; however, for me I would prefer to spend it being home with my family, doing things of my interest and studying books with all the resources available in peaceful environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 369, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ll these things being alone in my home. If I spend my weekend being with friends I...
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Line 5, column 113, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding materials'?
Suggestion: the surrounding materials
...er than my home because I will have all the materials around me. Also, I would have laptop and internet...
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Line 5, column 481, Rule ID: AS_ADJ_AS[1]
Message: Comparison is written "as well 'as'".
Suggestion: as
...me. There are some other places as well like libraries, parks but for me home is the...
^^^^
Line 5, column 556, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...me is the best among all. There will be no any noises and hence I can have full co...
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Line 5, column 1173, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'clearing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: clearing
... can even save the time which I require to clear concept to my friend about the topic be...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, likewise, may, regarding, second, so, well, whereas, while, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, talking about, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 9.8082437276 234% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 80.0 43.0788530466 186% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 82.0 52.1666666667 157% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2463.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 555.0 407.700716846 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43783783784 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85370353223 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45922118768 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.443243243243 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 786.6 618.680645161 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.2358863965 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.625 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302596274136 0.236089414692 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960688656085 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0969929955199 0.0737576698707 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223595081423 0.150856017488 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716724979713 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.77 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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