Time spines and with every spine there is a change and ever since the technological development took place in the 20th century there have been an immersed changes in the field of multinational companies. This changes has proved to be quite advantageous to many develop countries. This essay is going to discussed the advantages and disadvantages and reach a logical conclusion, using sentiment and pertinent examples.
In other to justify my view point, multinational companies open door to global job opportunity to the youth of the country they settled in. In addition, before a multinational company establish in a develop countries there is need for the firm construction which provide job for the jobless graduate. Not only this another pivotal aspect of my stance, is that it boost the financial economy of the country with it foreign currency thereby boosting the countries economy.
However, this multinational companies can cause significant damage to the country. For instance, operating of big machinery which releases dust and chemicals to our atmosphere can result in air pollution. Besides, this can cause detrimental effect to human health. In fact, people can fall ill and develop respiratory disease which can become chronic and result in death.
To conclude, I would say everything has it own pros and cons, and government should be prudent enough to assess the nature of business multinational companies intend to develop in their country and prevent risk to humans. This will help protect the general wellbeing of the nature.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 156, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'change'?
Suggestion: change
...0th century there have been an immersed changes in the field of multinational companies...
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Line 1, column 218, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'have', 'haven'.
Suggestion: have; haven
...f multinational companies. This changes has proved to be quite advantageous to many...
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Message: 'Going to' requires the base form: 'discuss'
Suggestion: discuss
...velop countries. This essay is going to discussed the advantages and disadvantages and re...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...re a multinational company establish in a develop countries there is need for the firm co...
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Line 2, column 452, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...t foreign currency thereby boosting the countries economy. However, this multinational c...
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Line 4, column 44, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'owns'?
Suggestion: owns
...conclude, I would say everything has it own pros and cons, and government should be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, well, for instance, in addition, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27935222672 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92409730191 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623481781377 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7678444811 50.4703680194 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.666666667 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5833333333 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 7.25397266985 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286302664443 0.242375264174 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098222004772 0.0925447433944 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06595733568 0.071462118173 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14881222774 0.151781067708 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445733607072 0.0609392437508 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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