Write a letter to your manager complaining about parking problems and suggest some solutions.
What are the problems
Why should solve the problems
How to solve the problems.
Dear Mr. James,
I am writing to complain about parking issues that employees are facing nowadays in the office parking area.
Let me explain this problem in detail. Firstly, vehicle owners tend to park their vehicles in an improper manner and there is no way to segregate parking area of two-wheeler and four-wheeler vehicles, which makes parking too difficult for everyone. Moreover, finding vacant space for parking is another challenge for company employees as there is no authorization check to prohibit outsiders to park their vehicles. Lastly, number of instances of car collapses have been recorded in last week due to the absence of speed breakers.
Therefore, I believe that management should address aforementioned issues in order to avoid any major or minor accidents and damages. Moreover, systematic and smooth parking will also save the time of employees.
As far as solutions are concerned to deal with these issues, presence of security guards to assist vehicle owners and disallow parking by outsiders in company premises will be of great help. Moreover, construction of speed breakers will slow down the incoming and outgoing traffic in order to avoid collapses.
I hope that you would consider aforementioned genuine concern of the employees and do the needful as soon as possible.
Yours sincerely,
Ell Green
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 92, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an improper manner" with adverb for "improper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...icle owners tend to park their vehicles in an improper manner and there is no way to segregate parkin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, lastly, moreover, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 32.9175257732 39% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1138.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3679245283 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80434743613 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660377358491 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2889423013 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.454545455 76.5299724578 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130088808628 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464287930384 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437941131675 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0704867521468 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639705586813 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 8.37731958763 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 8.71597938144 159% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 7.59969072165 125% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 41.2886597938 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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