If doctor’s record of treating be accessable to patients, patients will be able to know about doctors, and they may determine which doctor will be competent to treat them. But there are some other points to be concerened about.
Patients can be from any types of people with any placement of education. Hence the patient can not be sure if he can determine the competency of his doctor just by looking at the doctor’s record. To be able to determine the operativeness of the doctor, the patient should know enough about similar patients who have been under the doctor’s treatment. And the patients records are private and it is forbidden for public to access them.
On the other hand if a patient knows some about his doctor, he will be more relax. If he knows similar patients have been treated be the doctor’s cure, he will be more hopeful about his cure. Indeed he can trust his doctor by heart.
In conclusion, patients should have the right to know about their doctor’s experience to cure similar patients, so they will be more motivated to do what their doctors want them to do, and patients family will be more relax and hopeful too.
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