Although some people are of the opinion that offenders should be sentenced in jails, others believe that they can be dealt with other different ways. I agree with the latter school of thought as it has the potential to control the crime level in a country.
On the one hand, criminals should be asked to perform these acts in order to eventually result in a positive outcome: reduced crime. Firstly, if they were to ask to donate their currency on affected people for their whole life, on whom they committed the crime, these offenders would consider not carrying out this activity as a vast majority of people perform it for money in the first place. Secondly, persistently educating criminals about how crime devastates people’s lives can change their attitude towards doing it again. For instance, about 35% of crime rate has reduced ever since the Indian government accounted for tutoring offenders about life-threatening consequences of offense to innocent people.
On the other hand, imprisonment has been a traditional way to punish a lawbreaker for many year as he would not be able to have as many facilities as he could have at home, and he should carry out plenty of voluntary work at the prison. This entire distinct way of life is what is considered as a method to transform his viewpoint on committing a crime. Nevertheless, there is a chance that this practice would even exacerbate the offense in a country since every person at prisons is more likely to discuss illegal activities, such as technologies and easy applications to do them. Therefore, learning as many tools as they want while imprisoned, many criminals are more likely to continue this action.
In conclusion, even though it is said that incarceration is the best way to penalize a criminal, this way appears to aggravate the crime rate of a country. Instead, asking them to perform certain things may help combat crime.
- Some people think it is better for a country's economy for the people to spend money while others believe that it would be better for people to save money. Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
- Some people think that men are naturally more competitive than women. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
- Disposing waste on streets has become a common problem in many countries these days What are the causes and solutions for this issue 85
- In order to study at university students are required to pay expensive tuition fees. Not all students can afford them so some people think that university education should be free for everyone.To what extent do you agree? 61
- The current trend in education is to move away from traditional exams and instead have continuous assessment over the school year What do you think of this trend 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 404, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...nto jails by doing crimes again. Prison are thus one of the best way to treat crim...
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Line 3, column 412, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s by doing crimes again. Prison are thus one of the best way to treat criminals a...
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Line 3, column 465, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...best way to treat criminals and creates a oppertunity to change their criminal be...
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Line 3, column 515, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ity to change their criminal behaviour. On the other hand, people who attempt to...
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Line 7, column 56, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...though some people support that prision is best way to make changes in criminals, there...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, therefore, thus, while, apart from, as to, for instance, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89102564103 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47551288359 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564102564103 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.6228718503 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.384615385 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199860588861 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647556623858 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463763374397 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123514158632 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354329880449 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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