Dear Mr Smith,
I am writing with regard to express my dissatisfaction with your travel package. on the morning of may 19,2017 I came to your agency in order to book a foreign trip and according on your advice I made my decision. So, I reserved your special trip to Spain which was supposed to last for 7 days in a luxury hotel.
In fact, your flight was not punctuate and we got bothered because of that. Also, the hotel was not the one which we made an agreement for that. Actually I was very shocked when I found that hotel in a extremely low standard which was even lack of basement facilities and was not equipped with the items that was supposed to be.
Therefore, adapt on the above mentioned, I am going to ask for a refund back. I hope you give your immediate attention to this demand. In case of ignoring my request, I will be forced to seek legal advise.
I look forward hearing you.
Yours faithfully,
FATEMEH BAGHERI
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...ssatisfaction with your travel package. on the morning of may 19,2017 I came to yo...
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Line 5, column 30, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'punctuated'.
Suggestion: punctuated
... hotel. In fact, your flight was not punctuate and we got bothered because of that. Al...
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Line 5, column 201, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...very shocked when I found that hotel in a extremely low standard which was even l...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, look, may, so, therefore, in fact, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 780.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50867052023 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49993150362 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630057803468 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0114112794 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.9090909091 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7272727273 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210956131924 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855899987246 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694028016631 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12733622497 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597835767885 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.