The table below presents the number of children ever born to women aged 40-44 years in Australia for each year the information was collected since 1981.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The table demonstrates amount number of children born to women aged 40-44 years old, in 1981, 1986, 1996, and 2006, in Australia.
According to the information, there were two basic general trends of children’s number: upward and downward. For the former trend, there were 40-44 years old women never being a mother 8.5 percent in1981, before climbed up to 9.7 percent in 1986, and, rose up to 12.8 and 15.9 percent, in 1996 and 2006, respectively. This pattern was also as same as in the case of women who had a child, with 7.6, 8.7, 11.3, and 13.2 percent, in the same four mentioned years. Fur...
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Sentence: This number increased considerably to 35.6 percent in1986, and, continue went up gradually to approximately 38 percent in 1996 and 2006.
Description: A verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive is not usually followed by a verb, past tense
Suggestion: Refer to continue and went
Sentence: Regarding the downward trend, third child were born to women between 40-44 years old about 27 percent in 1981 and 1986, but when ten years were past, it dropped to 24.6 percent, and, continue went down to 21.5 percent in the final year of the table.
Description: A verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive is not usually followed by a verb, past tense
Suggestion: Refer to continue and went
Sentence: This rate was a result of continue dropped number by times, with 27.6 percent in 1981, nearly 19 percent in 1986, and about 13 percent in 1996.
Description: The token of is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to of and continue
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 10
No. of Words: 276 200
No. of Characters: 1235 1000
No. of Different Words: 127 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.076 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.475 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.207 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 70 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 49 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 25 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 17 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 27.6 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.128 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.493 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.679 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.158 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4