It is widely known that waste disposal is increased to great extent in past few years. This essay portrays the issue faced by waste and possible solutions of reducing waste.
Firstly, we follow convenience food with pack n throw plastic sheets in it. Further plastic is bionondegradable and it remains in land fill for years. Secondly, we are throwing away waste without knowing it could affect public if accumulated.
Obviously, the possible solutions are following 3R's approach. Most importantly reduce the plastic waste yard waste and in some cases dispose them in dustbins. Later government should take steps to recycle them. Some of paper waste is reused after recycling for use of student notebooks. Furthermore, government should conduct awareness camps to reduce unwanted material.
In conclusion, 3R approach and government camps should reduce scraps to more than that is expected.
- In many parts of the world there is continuous coverage of sport on television. Some people believe this discourages the young from taking part in any sport themselves.Discuss this view and give your own opinion. 67
- Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter thank them for the photos and for the holiday explain why you didnot write each. 78
- Task2:Today more people are travelling than ever before.Why is this the case?What are the benefits of travelling for the traveler? 78
- Some people say that TV advertisements have benefits, while others believe the opposite. Discuss both the views, give your own opinion and include examples from your experience. 61
- Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter thank them for the photos and for the holiday explain why you didnot write each. 89
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...roach and government camps should reduce scraps to more than that is expected.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 760.0 1615.20841683 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 140.0 315.596192385 44% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42857142857 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43979062825 4.20363070211 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7794434915 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 176.041082164 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.692857142857 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 506.74238477 44% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 14.0741836221 49.4020404114 28% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.0909090909 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7272727273 20.7667163134 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.54545454545 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0954614823108 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0360097589353 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393023353277 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.065750846032 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398636027456 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.33 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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