A friend had a newborn baby, you have picked up a present for the baby and want to visit a friend to give it to him/ her . write a letter including the following points.
. congratulation your friend
. Tell him why you picked yo the mentioned present
. suggest arrangments for the visit.
Dear Leela,
I am thrilled to hear that you have given the birth of your first child safely. I saw her pictures on Instagram. She is really adorable. Please accept my heartiest congratulation on this glorious occasion. I am sure she will make you bask in the glory of good future all through your life.
I regret my inadequacy as I cannot meet you early. As a matter of fact, I came to Tokyo to attend an official meeting on Monday. My tasks will occupy me here for another week. I will return to Delhi on 27th October. I am planning to visit you on Friday, the 28th of October, at around 4 p.m. Thus, please let me know if it is convenient for you. In case, you have any other plan on Friday, I can come later as well.
Finally, I cannot wait to see you and your kid. I have already bought a gift for her. I checked out several, eventually, selected a carrycot as I found it quite helpful for a little.
Once again I congratulate you on your well-deserved happiness.
Best Wishes,
Kirti
- You have some repairs to do at home, but there is a restaurant next to your house. Write a letter to the restaurant manager and say:- What repairs are you going to do?- How will it affect the restaurant?- Provide a solution for the inconvenience. 89
- A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter• give contact details for when you are away• give instructions about how to care for your pet• describe other household dutie 56
- You want to recommend someone to work in a company. Write a letter to the manager.In your letter, you should tell:Who the person isHow did you know the personWorking experience of the person.Why do you recommend the person? 81
- A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter• give contact details for when you are away• give instructions about how to care for your pet• describe other household dutie 56
- A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter• give contact details for when you are away• give instructions about how to care for your pet• describe other household dutie 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 408, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... other plan on Friday, I can come later as well. Finally, I can't wait to s...
^^
Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... I found it quite helpful for a little. Once again I congratulate you on your well-d...
^^^^^^
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... happiness. Yours lovingly, Kirti
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, thus, well, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 837.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5737704918 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6831992218 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68306010929 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7666053921 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 52.3125 76.5299724578 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.4375 16.8248392259 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1875 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171533431302 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536327511887 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389675792481 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.098485242716 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178325217997 0.0580467560999 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.04 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.