Nowadays, we can ship the food or fruits which are out of season to other countries, this practice waste time and money and totally unnecessary. Discuss both sides and what is your opinion.
It is a waste of time and money when sending food and fruits to other countries, as the belief of many people, though they were not grown in the best time of the year. This essay will provide a both pros and cons discussion.
In the one hand, there are some reasons that shipping food and fruits oversea should be encouraged. The most important reason is that this trend will create more job opportunities for people which help the country agriculture to be demonstrated. A good example for this is Viet Nam which is the second largest country exporting rice in the world, thanks to this trend, jobless people can have a great chance to make ends meet as the government need huge farmer forces. Furthermore, the country can take the advantage of this occasion to boost the country economy by marking up the price as the more effort they put in.
Although providing cuisines abroad benefit both the country as well as the residents, there also are some potential drawbacks. To begin with the nation, focusing too much on a particular field can badly affect the development of the other fields such as technology, science and so on, the capital is unaffordable for all other fields, as the country can not take back the money, it would be a waste of money. More importantly, food and fruits earned from exporting can facilitate both the country and the residents, but it may not in the best condition which not only directly affect the health of the other nations as well as the money pumped in it but also defame the reputation of the country.
In conclusion, it is true that the profits earned by exporting cuisine abroad can benefit both the country and the residents but the drawbacks outweigh the benefits as the harm to the people's health. In my opinion, the trading should be encouraged but the importing step should be more strict.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 61, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...uisines abroad benefit both the country as well as the residents, there also are some pote...
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Line 7, column 185, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...utweigh the benefits as the harm to the peoples health. In my opinion, the trading shou...
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Line 7, column 295, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e importing step should be more strict.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, may, second, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70679012346 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51313232748 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521604938272 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.5666481258 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.636363636 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4545454545 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1818181818 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235018589886 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882618047821 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573925546008 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146117345732 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676643295006 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 11.3001002004 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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