Many cities have become less pleasant places to live in recent years. What do you think are the causes of it? What solution can you suggest?
Almost every country in the world is facing an environmental problem, affecting its land, air or water.
I believe the main problems on land are a rubbish and a toxic oil waste what contaminate the soil where people are growing vital products,
or just trees to make our air is cleaner.
Perhaps the most helpful things we can do to tackle these difficulties is to simply clean after yourself the place you have visited,
and regularly sweep your own territory and to keep safely all toxic and dangerous stuff.
The ways in which air is affected are as follows. The old cars and transport, old factories which emit harmful substances into the air.
The best solution to reduce these problems is to release more ecological transport, renewed old factories will make cleaner an air,
as well as planting more trees and creating more parks in urban areas.
The reasons for pollution on the water we can highlight the same affected problems mentioned above as all of it connected each-other.
A set of solving what can be helpful in addition we talked above is cleaning rivers, filtering dirty water floods.
It is crucial that at least these measures considered above are taken in order to make a healthy future for our planet.
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- In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and atrting university studies.Discuss the advantage and disadvantaged for young people who decide to do this. 67
- Many cities have become less pleasant places to live in recent years. What do you think are the causes of it? What solution can you suggest? 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, at least, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1034.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 211.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90047393365 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52445197073 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63981042654 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9961132575 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.888888889 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4444444444 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.38176352705 251% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0976955723911 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0342011591902 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043672744043 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0330550718288 0.151304729494 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514429085048 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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