There have been problem with public transport you use to commute daily .Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company in your letter.
1. Describe the problems.
2. Explain how these problems effective you and others.
3. Suggest what could be done about it.
Dear Sir,
My name is Chandni Sharma hail from Bathinda city Being the daily customer of your transport services I suppose to aware you about the inconvenience which are being faced by us . Here I am paining down to grab your attention towards above said problem.
Although , your bus services are rather cheaper then others and the service have been consumed by from long time but now a days it seem that the untrained drivers are being hire by you who are driving so roughly and threatened the masses. few days a ago we are about to met an accident due to his harsh driving which can be harmful for folks as well as for your good will.
Here I want to suggest you to warn them for rush driving or firstly trained them in a proper way so that people can remain trust on your transport and can assure their safety with you.
Hope you will consider my problem and will act sharply on that .
Your faithfully
Chandni Sharma
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... my problem and will act sharply on that . Your faithfully Chandni Sharma
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...m and will act sharply on that . Your faithfully Chandni Sharma
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, so, then, well, as for, i suppose, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 762.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48235294118 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18821058443 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.688235294118 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.1092863995 44.8134815571 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.857142857 76.5299724578 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 16.8248392259 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 4.34317383033 217% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207062775648 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893978758819 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395466602478 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12412536645 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315575180722 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.0 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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