tpo 42 - w1
Every year, millions of birds get injured when they are flying through glass windows just because they could not distinguish between glass and open air. The reading passage suggests three ways to stop birds from harming themselves. However, all methods are strongly refuted by the lecturer.
First, the author states that using reflex glass instead of regular ones can cause birds to distinguish between open air and glass. Thus, they avoid flying through it. But the professor points out that this idea not only is not going to help them but also it may cause more injuries. Since the reflex glasses are like mirrors, they would reflect the sky or tree, the birds may think it is the real sky or tree. Therefore, they would fly through it. Regarding this situation, the idea of reflex glass is not practical.
Second, although the author believes that by making some colourful strips on a glass, helping birds avoid flying through it, the lecturer cast doubts this idea. He mentions that bird would have flown through an unpainted area which they see as holes. Thus, designers are obliged to create smaller holes. But smaller holes make the room too dark. Accordingly, the idea of designing glass with colourful lines won’t work too.
Finally, in contrast to the idea in the passage of making an electromagnetic field around a building- helping birds to avoid glass and redirect- the professor disagrees with it. He points out that birds use their magnetic ability just during the long trip. So in the short trip, like going from one side of the city to the other side, birds don’t use it, and they only use their eyes and brightness of light to find their directions. Consequently, this idea is also impractical.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, finally, first, however, may, regarding, second, so, therefore, thus, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 22.412803532 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 30.3222958057 132% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1373.03311258 105% => OK
No of words: 293.0 270.72406181 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92491467577 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36266234382 2.5805825403 92% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 145.348785872 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566552901024 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 419.366225166 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.9930550531 49.2860985944 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1666666667 110.228320801 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2777777778 21.698381199 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06452816374 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.465909435181 0.272083759551 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138964236288 0.0996497079465 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0985314684141 0.0662205650399 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.29051144866 0.162205337803 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423205583377 0.0443174109184 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.3589403974 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 53.8541721854 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.0289183223 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.2367328918 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.42419426049 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.7273730684 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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