Air travel only benefits the richest people. The majority of people get no advantage from development of air travel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that air travel is well known with luxurious trip. It becomes the most expensive tour because it uses plane which has modern technology and high speed. Some people assume that majority of people get no advantage from air travel. While there are some good reasons why this is the case, I believe that it only gives advantages for richest people.
Most of poor or middle economic level society almost never use air travel when they want to go somewhere. They prefer to use land or sea transportation to do their trip, such as bus, car, motorcycle, train, and car. The main reason they cannot enjoy air travel because the price of ticket is very expensive. It is totally different with other transportations’s price that are usually cheap. Although sometimes air plane companies offer discount or promo, majority of people are still difficult to try. They have to save money for several months to buy plane ticket. Ticket promotion also has tight requirement and publishing, so only a few people know about discount or promotion information. That is why majority people do not get benefits from air travel.
On the other hand, air plane gives more advantages for richest people. It has good service, convenient seat, high technology machine, expensive fuel, and routine treatment. They proves that air travel is very expensive. People usually use a plane for long trip and business activity. Although it has a high price, I think it is comparable with service that is offered by companies. The most advantage from air travel is effectivity and efficiency for time. Using plane makes the journey shorter than using land transportation. Only ordinary people who has high salary who can use air travel, such as the President, Minister, and Businessman.
In conclusion, there are convincing arguments both for and against who can use air travel, but I believe that market segmentation for it is the richest people.
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