Now a days we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can the government do to reduce the amount of waste produced?
Several people will have differing views on this topic. As I have always been a strong advocate of the saying that cleanliness is next to godliness, I am of the opinion that these days a lot of waste is being generated and this has been causing many problems in the society. Additionally, I believe that the government should look into this issue seriously which can cause great damage to human health and environment. Further discussion will be done in the following paragraphs.
In deep contrast to my views (expressed above), there are some people in the society and municipal authorities who do not pay heed if excess litter is being produced. There are wastages like plastic items, leftover food, animal skin or organs which are a by-product of inhuman animal slaughter that lie in garbage bins on the roads which give rise to bacterial infections . I opine that the ruling government should come up with concrete measures to ensure that the production of waste material is reduced to a great extent as this will benefit the society a lot.
My views on this topic are strengthened by a few experiences in my personal life. Being a government official myself, I had once come across a group of local municipal government workers who took an initiative which had a great impact on reduction of waste production. In 2017, local cleaning authorities of Hopkins Colony encouraged residents to opt for vegetarian food so that rubbish coming from animal meat declines. Then they also requested colony members to give plastic leftovers for recycling which significantly helped in decreasing the litter percentage generated from plastic usage. Likewise, efforts should also be made by the central government as well.
Based on the elaborate discussion above, we can infer that if the government takes serious steps in order to keep the city clean and green, then we will surely experience a great fall in rubbish being produced.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, likewise, look, so, then, well, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01557632399 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73665752233 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582554517134 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3305581641 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.846153846 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6923076923 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129911598897 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431293034607 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328212747593 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0817063322343 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0158418759142 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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