please rate my essay and give me suggestion to improve my essay.. How can i put more difficult and unique word in this essay ? Share some ideas
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please rate my essay and give me suggestion to improve my essay.. How can i put more difficult and unique word in this essay ? Share some ideas
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From this message:
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
I understand that you used some easy or simple words. You may use more difficult words according to this message:
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
Overall, it is a nice essay.