Hydro-electric Power Generation
The scene shows the how the circle of hydro-electric power generation comes from.
Based on the picture, the source of hydro-electric power generation voltage is resulted from the sea water that evaporates to become cloud. Sea water evaporates to become cloud, and make rain from the mountain into the sea. Sea water will be made reservoir which is limited by dam.
As the result, the using of voltage will be divided by two purposes, which one is connected with turbine to bring sea water to pump, and the other process is used to separate energy to transformer station. Transformer station receives energy by high voltage cables and towers that are able to generate much energy to distribute to station. As a result, by underground cables, transformer station delivers energy for human needs of electrics; houses, hospitals, or schools.
All in all, the energy of electric can generate from the power of nature source, sea water.
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Sentence: The scene shows the how the circle of hydro-electric power generation comes from.
Description: The token the is not usually followed by a WH-adverb
Suggestion: Refer to the and how
Sentence: All in all, the energy of electric can generate from the power of nature source, sea water.
Description: The word electric is not usually used as a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to electric
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