Some people prefer activities and lifestyle in hot climates while others prefer activities and lifestyle in cold climate.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Individual preferences are observed regarding choice of weather for physical activities. Some people like hot conditions for sports while others believe that you can gain maximum benefits in cold environment. Firstly, I will cover the reasons for liking to summer and later will explore the benefits of winter on lifestyle preferences.
Mostly summers are associated with long daylight times where you can utilize the natural light to the maximum. Outdoor activities, such as hiking and trekking, can be fully enjoyed during the summers where there is less constraint of low light and long daylight window is available to cover lengthy tracks. Furthermore, it is a common belief among most of the people that you shed more weight during summers as compared to winters.
Although cold conditions restrict movement in some areas, people like it because of more time available for indoor activities such as weight lifting. Winters help individuals to achieve preset body building goals and better shape for upcoming summers. In cold months, there are less chances of dehydration when compared to hot months. Further to add, minimum calorie requirements of human being increase in cold months allowing certain individuals to eat more without gaining weights.
In conclusion, there are benefits associated to both cold and warm environment. Summers allow individuals to explore outdoor interests and sports while winters allow you to spend more time on indoor activities. As it comes down to personal choices to liking of weather, I like activities in winters as it gives us more freedom to eat and engage in high intensity training in gym.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun chances is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, regarding, so, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29885057471 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68799000971 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567049808429 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9300855229 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.384615385 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15781577758 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548547433807 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492822271278 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0946146329367 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553390427427 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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