It is an obvious truth that people especially shopkeepers must take care about selling local foods instead of foreign ones. In this essay I am going to mention the causes of being for that.
First and foremost is about economy. As a matter of fact, by purchasing domestic products, our farmers will be encouraged to product more and more. So, our society will be more developed and it can contribute to a huge number of advantages. The mot significant advantage that can be mentioned is include: boosting the self confidence of producers.
Secondly, selling local foods in hypermarkets can lead to being more healthy. In other words, these kinds of food contrary to
foreign ones are lack of any preservatives. Therefore, they can be considered as the most healthy foods. As a fact, some convenience foods which most of the times are named as imported foods lead to different disease such as, numerous cancers and lung disease like asthma.
However, a majority of benefits are related to selling local foods, the down sides can not be neglected. Naturally, they are some people who are not in favour of local foods and may be bothered by utilizing them. The exact example is about tourists, who come from other countries. Hence, every kind of taste must be considered.
In conclusion, Adapt on the above_mentioned points, I tend to support selling of local foods because benefits outweigh the drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a matter of fact, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00423728814 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76308552636 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60593220339 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6745205361 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7333333333 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7333333333 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177212725476 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594299789727 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682428059558 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113188327867 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630373541421 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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