The author of has presented a situation of Balmer where mopeds are responsible for increased accidents during summer. The population increased index presented by the author does not come by a reliable source. Definitely islands are famous place for tourist during summer but numbers presented needs to be bolster by evidences. Advices given by author are pretty vague in the sense as if mopeds rental limit reduces to 50. It will create a lot of problem to commuters during the season. On the other there will be very less business in the industry. Road accidents are not only caused by mopeds but lack of infrastructure and disobeying traffic rules are major causes for such incidents. There are lot of local criteria that will make Seaville and Balmer island situations completely different. This puts doubt on the comparison made by the author.
It evident that Balmer Island attracts a lot of tourist during summer. This actually boots local businesses and promote tourism. To ease transportation the moped service make the place likeable tourist attraction. In recent years increase in accidents has actually made the local more concerned. Analysing the situation more analytically a lot of factor has contributed in the situation. Irregular construction by the local authorities, encroachments on the road, manual traffic control system and lack of proper infrastructure management are major reasons. Reducing the number of moped will only cover one aspect of the problem but definitely it will ease the load currently.
Seaville is island had different demographic all together, which makes the comparison absurd. Even though the comparison are not helpful but there are lot of things that Balmer can learn from it neighbour in terms of infrastructure development and crowd management. Such efficient methods have made the island safe for tourist. The limit on rental moped varies depending on time. On rush hours the government has started bus service from important tourist place to importance place in town. On the other had the government has taken the chance to introduce gear cycle on rental basis which can be availed 24*7 form any bus stand. This nullifies rental cap on moped.
The government should decide based on resources available and current scenarios so that everyone one is safe and enjoy their holidays.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 24 15
No. of Words: 376 350
No. of Characters: 1923 1500
No. of Different Words: 199 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.403 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.114 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.722 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 146 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 99 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 73 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 58 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.667 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.72 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.333 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.265 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.42 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.028 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 441, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of problems'.
Suggestion: a lot of problems
...tal limit reduces to 50. It will create a lot of problem to commuters during the season. On the ...
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Line 3, column 340, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun factor seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of factors'.
Suggestion: a lot of factors
...alyzing the situation more analytically a lot of factor has contributed in the situation. Irreg...
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Line 7, column 61, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... decide based on resources available and current scenarios so that everyone one i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.6327345309 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.9520958084 62% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 13.6137724551 51% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 28.8173652695 42% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 55.5748502994 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 16.3942115768 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1958.0 2260.96107784 87% => OK
No of words: 376.0 441.139720559 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20744680851 5.12650576532 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.743665283 2.78398813304 99% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 204.123752495 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542553191489 0.468620217663 116% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 705.55239521 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 19.7664670659 121% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.8473053892 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8840484137 57.8364921388 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5833333333 119.503703932 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 23.324526521 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.875 5.70786347227 15% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.20758483034 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.67664670659 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258334301718 0.218282227539 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656325506588 0.0743258471296 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730954688085 0.0701772020484 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132297264258 0.128457276422 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083105367702 0.0628817314937 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.3799401198 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 48.3550499002 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.197005988 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.5979740519 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.32208582834 107% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 98.500998004 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 12.3882235529 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.1389221557 72% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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