To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position
To understand the vital characteristics if a society, means to understand that the society comprises. Characteristics of a society is reflected by its members. The member of a society may have certain differences along with the similarities; A society is a set of the different elements it has. One who wish to understand a society needs to, at first, understand what a society is build with. The best way to do so, in my opinion, is to study the major cities along with the study of the rural characteristics of the society. For example, if one wish to understand the Nepalese society, it is certainly not sufficient to just study some big cities like Kathmandu, Pokhara, or Butwal; these cities represent only the modern life of Nepal, where as the actual characteristics of a society of Nepal can be understood by experiencing life away from the hectic life of these big cities.
Firstly, to understand the important characteristics means to understand the cultural, social, religious, economic, and of course other many aspects of the society, which are special among the society. A person studying such aspects on a major city will, undoubtedly, show that people in such cities are self-centered; everyone have their job to keep. He may see the lacking in the some of the important characteristics of society; like cooperation, mutual understanding, interdependence, as everyone is busy making their own life. He might also see some big temples or monasteries build and and preserved and also many people visiting such places might show the devotion of people but these places have rather to a tourist destination than true devotion. In these large cities, people from surrounding smaller towns and cities migrate to fulfill their dreams and make their life better then ever it was; but while they struggle to make their life a better place, they forget about the society and began to act more like a programmed robots. This is when the rural life takes over the self-centered city life.
Usually, the characteristics of the rural life is based on working with in the limited resources: working in the farms, raising cattle and so on. It is seen, in the rural area, that people have a lot better life than on cities. People in rural area are more devoted to the cultural and religious aspects, as they tend to preserve the cultures which have been inherited from their forebears. Co-operations between the members can be easily seen in such places, one happily helps other in the need, as the other person does. This is not to say that there is not any sense of competition between them, it is the competition that keeps us alive, but the sense of understanding and the feeling of unity out-rules the competitions.
While it is true that, the rural life readily reflects the characteristics of a society; it is not understand that the major cites does not play any role in the characteristics of the society. But the competition and the greed of being wealthy of a person living in such big cities have failed to meet the definition of society. Therefore, it might not be sufficient only to study some major cities and declare the characteristics of the whole society.
In conclusion, it can be inferred that the characteristics of society varies with the nature of the person living on such community and it may be a good idea to include different parts of society to study the characteristics of a society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...epresent only the modern life of Nepal, where as the actual characteristics of a society...
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... to keep. He may see the lacking in the some of the important characteristics of soc...
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...e some big temples or monasteries build and and preserved and also many people visiting...
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...ulfill their dreams and make their life better then ever it was; but while they struggle to...
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...their dreams and make their life better then ever it was; but while they struggle to...
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Suggestion: understood
...characteristics of a society; it is not understand that the major cites does not play any ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, so, then, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, of course, such as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 88.0 58.6224719101 150% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2844.0 2235.4752809 127% => OK
No of words: 582.0 442.535393258 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88659793814 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.91168771031 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00299012938 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.419243986254 0.4932671777 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 914.4 704.065955056 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.0757317035 60.3974514979 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.428571429 118.986275619 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7142857143 23.4991977007 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52380952381 5.21951772744 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162892914219 0.243740707755 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614123128303 0.0831039109588 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046240124475 0.0758088955206 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10091772389 0.150359130593 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034615645637 0.0667264976115 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.