Agree or disagree-traveling in own country is better than traveling in a foreign country
I personally feel that people would benefit more from traveling in a foreign country rather than traveling in their own country. There are three reasons for my argument.
Firstly, it is well observed that most people travel for leisure and to experience different cultures. Traveling in a foreign country gives one a plethora of opportunity to interact with new people from different background. Thus, exposing oneself to different cultures. Experiencing different cultures has many benefits for instance it adds new dimensions to one's capability to look at a problem, it also makes one appreciate other people's thinking with a different background etc. Since, traveling in one's own country does not give much exposure to cultural variety, traveling to foreign country is a better choice for that purpose.
Secondly, if one is traveling in his/her own country one os bound to spend in a similar fashion as one earn. Traveling to foreign country gives one an opportunity to travel to more places with the same amount of money. Especially if one is traveling to a country whose economy is not strong in comparison to one's own country economy, he/she spends less of his/her savings for traveling. Therefore traveling to a foreign country also give one an option to utilise their savings judiciously.
Furthermore, I think traveling to foreign country also gives one an opportunity to be on their own. On the other hand,when one is traveling in his/her own country he/she has a sense of familiarity of how things work around the place. They are familiar with the rules, weather, map, local environment of the place. Traveling outside does not give one that much of comfort and luxury. One has to step outside his/her comfort zone to travel in a foreign country. They have to be responsible for their own action. They have to plan ad organise their trips well to avoid any unwanted circumstances. In this way traveling enhances one's personality by becoming more responsible and organised.
Therefore, if one is given an option one should definitely opt for a foreign travel because of the benefits foreign travel provides.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, for instance, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1781.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 349.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10315186246 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80137802162 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469914040115 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 579.6 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4196511332 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.05 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.45 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414283479456 0.236089414692 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165159537817 0.076458572812 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13782835429 0.0737576698707 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.288422570682 0.150856017488 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057692886483 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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