some people think that only staff who work in a company for a long time should be promoted to a higher positions to what extent do you agree or disagree
Promotional debate now a days is a hot topic for every serving men or women working in a company. That's why, some individuals believes that it should only be done on seniority basis. But I will completely disagree with the statement with solid reasons coming forth.
The main reason why old workers should not be promoted on preference basis because that will transfer the loss on new recruiters, who have high current and great strength to work. As it is well known fact that young recruiters can complete his work in half the time as compared to old stuff. In short, evaluation of ranks must be on the basis of completion of task not by the old members of company.
The other importive reason to believe that very old hired and should not get promoted because it will diminish the talent of young and new employees. Measuring scale for evaluation of grade should only be on the pillars of talent and intellect, so that, they got motivated and eventually serve the company with profit. Gist of the reason is that, performance should be done by the measuring scale of talent and intellect.
To re-capitulated it, the advancement of rank should be based upon completion of task and intellectual talent of the workman. In my opinion ,I completely disagree with the proposition that upgrading of grid should only be performed due to seniority.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
Promotional debate now a days is a hot topic for every serving men or...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, well, in short, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1118.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81896551724 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69852372994 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568965517241 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8935789953 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.636363636 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0909090909 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219916144586 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866080596079 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407144257552 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13704055534 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182226821318 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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