Indepence
Nowadays, living independently is very important. However, not all the people know how to live independently and the benefits of living independently. Even in my group, there are some people know what is living independently and some do not. So today, we will tell you what exactly is independence and the related things.
First of all, what does independence mean to you? To me, independence is not depend on others too much, trying to do things by yourself. Simple example is responsible student, completes his tasks on time, and never needs to be reminded about assignments and other schoolwork, self - reliance do homework. That is a pattern of an independent person. But independence doesn’t only mean like that. Cooking for yourself, not feeling sad and helpless when alone, taking the initiative and start your own projects, having good daily habits and keep your body healthy and clean, making decisions about everyday matters quickly, …etc. All of them are independence. With these abilities, you will become an independent person.
Second, how to be independent? Well it isn’t hard to think about it. Living an independent life or not, just only you can decide. Thinking independently, one of the important ways to be independent. Just accepting and believing in yourself. You can’t be independent if you still care about what do people think about you. Ignore others’ bad thoughts and negative words about you, just be yourself. But if they have good intentions and suggest you making something better for yourself, you should consider their opinions. That’s what thinking independently is. Besides, you have to acting independently too. Doing things by yourself and with your best efforts, you will gain the best result. You also must throw away all of your bad habits that can influence your heath and your life. Acting independently like this doesn’t hard at all, right? So what are you waiting for? Let’s change your thoughts and activities to be more independent now!
Finally, what are the benefits of being independent? The most obvious benefits when you live independently is your confidence improves a lot. While living independently, you will gain more and more experience. This will build up more confidence in you with the knowledge that you can do things on your own. That’s why you will make better decisions for your life. You will also become less depend on others too. When you can do things by yourself, there is no need to rely so much on others people. Once you can live independently, that kind of living will reduce stress and promote happiness. You won’t have to worry too much about your life because right now, you can manage your own life with your own ways that make you feel more comfortable and successful.
Being independently doesn’t hard as you always think. With some changes in thoughts and activities, you can fully be an independent person. Once you can become an independent person, no one can prevent you from making your own decisions, you won’t scare of anything when you are alone, and you can make the best choices to become successful. Being independent will surely change your life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 78, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...mean to you? To me, independence is not depend on others too much, trying to do things...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, still, well, while, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 7.85571142285 293% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 72.0 24.0651302605 299% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2684.0 1615.20841683 166% => OK
No of words: 524.0 315.596192385 166% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12213740458 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7844588288 4.20363070211 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88040939393 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.459923664122 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 809.1 506.74238477 160% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 5.43587174349 294% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 39.0 16.0721442886 243% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.0639437793 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.8205128205 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4358974359 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61538461538 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 8.67935871743 253% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 3.4128256513 381% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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