The International tourism has becomme cheaper and cheaper and more countries are opening their doors to welcome more tourist.
Do the advantages of the International tourism out weight its disadvantages?
Global tourism has become affordable since last 15 years. Some countries involve employing their virgin natural sceneries as main income source. Indonesia forces local governments to manage their natural resource. Some people think, it is simple way to increase the economic. However, it also destroys the environment.
There are many new natural tourism spots appear around Indonesia lately, some of them are located in rural area. Long time ago, there were no access to reach there so those place only knew by neighborhood. Now, Local councils allow local and international investors largely to establish primary and secondary infrastructures. Absolutely, this project generates new job field for local inhabitant. When it becomes more popular visited by huge visitors, location also becomes more crowded. As a result, the revenue of national would improve. Furthermore, it would be spent to expand public facilities such as more schools, roads, hospitals and so on.
Conversely, the improvement of number traveler affects on environment balance in which access extent alters natural sides. For instance, founding resorts concern on excellent view which are closer to nature. Consequently, many natural areas are opened to connect each accommodation. Therefore, it demolishes ecology system in which animals move from their habitat. On the other sides, population also contributes some problems, for examples rubbish, water pollution and air pollution.
In my view, natural tourism system can be one of education pleasure in the future. Voyagers from parts over the world not only visit Indonesia for pleasure but also they can learn many things from nature by standing closer in circumstance. But, authorities should arrange wisely the system, because it is very venerable on human act.
To sum up, International tourism is great opportunity for countries to improve the economic by utilizing natural resource. Releasing cheap accommodation it will attract many travelers to come and stay, but it is also dangerous on environment without regulation and tight control.
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