A reporter complained about a new TV program that you like. Write a letter to the newspaper editor.
- Describe your point of view
- Say what you like about the show and why.
- Ask the newspaper to take some action.
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to express my deep concern with the article recently published in your magazine about the culinary program, Master Chef.
Master Chef is a famous television program for the last five years, and it is one of the demanding reality show among the people who are keen to culinary things. This program always disseminated inspiration to the young chefs who want to build their career in the same track. Besides, it provides huge tricks and tactics for everyone who wants to be creative in the kitchen. I think, your journalist, Mr. Sam Conner could consider the program as a learning session for all the participants and not taking it personally.
I am one of the fans of that program and I like the culinary skills of the host and his fairness towards the contestants. Although he sometimes expresses little impatience to the participant chefs, it is quite natural in a reality show and his constructive feedback outweighs everything. Therefore, people are viewing this show worldwide and the host has become a celebrity among the young chefs.
I would like to suggest reconsidering while writing in a newspaper about a celebrity chef. At the same time, your journalist might be given a warning for his professional development.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
John Smithson
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, look, so, therefore, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1128.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05829596413 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81730003957 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609865470852 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2070483453 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5833333333 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180840894176 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063388417441 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576031971274 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0984755480388 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381989262818 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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