Community problem
There are lot of community problem in the world. Some countries have smaller one, some countries have bigger one. All of people can complain and judge thier community problems, but we have to find out the rational solution.
In my country, one of the alarming problem is air pollution. Specially in our capital city, it's getting harmful and dangerous for our health and its reacted people's health and disease. The government spent huge amount of money for that, but it wasn't efficient. They spent it for nothing!
In my opinion, people mustn't be allowed to using a coal and importing a used cars. Government have to be strict on that.
And also government have to build more green garden.
1. In the suburbs people using a coal because they haven't any choice, but government have to build coking coal factory and make law of usage of coal.
2. In fact, we import almost 10000 vehicles and trucks in every single year, but about 90 percent of amount is used cars.
It's sound awful! Government have to make some law on importing cars. For example, they have to add some provision of importing cars emission. Mongolian Customs have to check the emission of cars and accept it when the cars passed the emission limt.
In the other hand, people must be follow the law and have to be allied.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 245, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...t huge amount of money for that, but it wasnt efficient. They spent it for nothing! ...
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Line 3, column 23, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: mustn't
... it for nothing! In my opinion, people mustnt be allowed to using a coal and importin...
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Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Government) must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...l and importing a used cars. Government have to be strict on that. And also govern...
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Line 5, column 52, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...uburbs people using a coal because they havent any choice, but government have to buil...
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Line 7, column 29, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Government) must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...sed cars. Its sound awful! Government have to make some law on importing cars. For...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, for example, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1067.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6798245614 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30584570999 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548245614035 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0493513978 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.1333333333 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0977274160669 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569127827567 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147481063088 0.0667982634062 221% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.037335357054 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789883420294 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.