The map below shows the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its developement.
the maps illustrate the present view of Islip town centre and how it will be developed in future. it's abundantly clear that in city development plan there will be not only overwhelming expansion of roads ,but relocation of houses and shops as well. when it comes to the present figure of the town centre of Islip, there is a main road on the north of map. On the two sides of this road there are a number of shops. There is also a countryside at the north of the town centre. This main road has two branches which one of them is on the east and the other is on the west. Both of these branches have south orientation; the west one ends to a housing area and the east one reaches to a park. There is a school in the south-west of the map beside one of the branches. in future program,there are a variety of changes which will take place in city centre. As far as roads are concerned, there will be constructed a dual carriageway which will surround the city center . The central part of main road will be replaced with pedestrian-only zone. There will be built two areas of new housing at the north-west and south-west of the city , as well. Although some central shops will remain unchanged, Northern shops of the city will be destroyed. A bus station will be constructed at the north-west of the city and a shopping centre with a car park will be opened beside this station.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1118.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 256.0 196.424390244 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3671875 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56340777707 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46875 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 343.8 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8026260331 43.030603864 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.8571428571 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.35714285714 5.23603664747 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0900010143593 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438639864408 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678123747718 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900010143593 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 11.4140731707 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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