Each one of us would at some point in life wish to move to somewhere different from where they already do live for various reasons,some being comfort, peace etc.
My friend Naomi plans to move to my town and am absolutely positive that she's going to like this town.First,the town is developed and has a lot of people,In other words,the town is densely populated and this would just be perfectly good for her boutique business as she also plans to relocate to my town.The town also contains a serene environment which is peaceful despite the buzz that seems to last a lifetime.
Secondly,the town has a set of different shopping malls and supermarkets ,alongside other industries and jewelry shops.Am well obliged to support the fact that Naomi is definitely going to like that because its so typical of her to go shopping almost every weekend,so the town's malls and shopping centers are of great significance to her.
Third,my town in comparison to her's,is in a good environmental hygiene state and is not spotted by rubbish as compared to her town,which has very few proper domestic waste management sites.The town has also good and stable power lighting system including street lights which at some extent are a sense of security,and for this reason Naomi will definitely be impressed with the town.
As for the dislikes,it's got to be the morning hour traffic jam that at a larger perspective is a waste of valuable time,and the industrial effluents and the congestion in the town.
In conclusion,though she is likely to dislike the town , my part i support the idea that she'll soon get used to it just as i did.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, third, well, as for, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 30.3222958057 132% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1373.03311258 98% => OK
No of words: 278.0 270.72406181 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85971223022 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86326316863 2.5805825403 111% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 145.348785872 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589928057554 0.540411800872 109% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 419.366225166 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 13.0662251656 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 21.2450331126 217% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.966178601 49.2860985944 233% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 225.166666667 110.228320801 204% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.3333333333 21.698381199 214% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.8333333333 7.06452816374 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.09492273731 147% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 27.0 4.19205298013 644% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189519057787 0.272083759551 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925442170194 0.0996497079465 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486459314619 0.0662205650399 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925442170194 0.162205337803 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486459314619 0.0443174109184 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.6 13.3589403974 184% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.25 53.8541721854 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.0289183223 182% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.8 12.2367328918 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.42419426049 109% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 63.6247240618 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 10.7273730684 256% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.498013245 194% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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