Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part on sports which are played in team, like football while other people think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Playing sports keep a vital role in our life to help ourself healthier and more fit. Some people think that playing team sports is more beneficial than individual sports while others are against that opinion. This essay will examine both views.
On the one hand, there are several advantages to join in team sports. Firstly, playing team sports requires participants to collaborate with other teammates to get achievement, thus their teamwork skills can be improved. It’s extremely helpful to their work. For example, playing football, a team sports consist of many persons who have the same passion and common goal. In order to win the match, all members have to work together, they share their experiments and make a plan to achieve their intension. This is similar to the process in which all employees are required to handle task so that the company’s objective can be accomplished.
Moreover, playing sports in team is also a great chance to meet new people and make new friends. It is an opportunity for a person ton interact with other easily. People are able to expand their network, at least in other teammates who come from another place, they can learn some different knowledge skills, etc.
On the other hand, individual sports also yield more effective for the player. They can enjoy his own choice whenever they want without depending on others. For instance, a person wants to improve his swimming performance, he can practice alone, he can choice to go swimming pool, a lake, or a river at any time of the day or year. Another advantage of solo sports is that the player is more likely independent, this ability keeps a crucial role in the success of a person. He sets up his goal and attempts his best to get good result without cooperation of other person.
To sum up, participating in sports is more and more positive effects for our health and mental. It depends much on the personality and the condition that people choose either team sports or individual sports. I tend to be more in favour of individual exercising since I am free to do whenever or wherever I want.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, thus, while, at least, for example, for instance, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1744.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83102493075 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61523133465 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556786703601 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4178527648 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.05 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233227780387 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748014592639 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0932730046397 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148353677971 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0883676332458 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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