A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your locality.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community.
Do you support or oppose the factory establishment?
The given topic requires critical analysis of the benefits and shortcomings due to the establishment of a new company in my neighbourhood. Although, the start of a new factory is likely to create opportunities for employment, however, the pollution and the adverse effect as a result of the establishment need to be critically analyzed before deciding whether I am in support or against the factory establishment.
On one hand, a new factory which is considerably big in size and belonging to a multi-national company is likely to invest a lot of money, both during the construction stage and during the production stage. In addition to this, since the company is likely to need a large group of skilled and unskilled labours, the local unemployment problem might be solved. However, without sufficient information about whether the company is likely to hire locals and how well they are going to pay to the workers, the good or bad effect of this employment scheme is debatable. But considering the prospect of new suppliers, distributors and logistics companies that might be set up locally to meet the demands of the company, I think that this will increase the income of the people in the community significantly and hence improve their standards of living.
On the other hand, since the factory is likely to produce a lot of pollutants and waste materials, most of which, if not treated, is likely to harm the environment of the local community and hence this will leave a negative impact on the society. However, if there are proper rules and regulations in place, and these rules are strictly adhered to by the executives in the company, then the problems associated might be negligible.
Overall, there seems to be a combination of positive and negative sides resulting from the establishment of the factory. If the risks associated with the factory are mitigated through contingency plans, and if people get employment or new business opportunities might open up due to the company, then I am definitely in favour of this establishment in my locality.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 50, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: big
...nd, a new factory which is considerably big in size and belonging to a multi-national compa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, then, well, i think, in addition, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03498542274 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09424369165 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504373177843 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.5047661428 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 172.7 106.682146367 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.3 20.7667163134 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177948782333 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710053040467 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410733264491 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112694609835 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427229177814 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.0946893788 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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