The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The given chart illustrates the amount of electricity produced and consumed by ten countries in 2014.
Overall, all countries, except Germany produced more electricity than consumed. According to the chart, Germany’s electricity production was approximately 60 million kWh short of the electricity used.
Furthermore, among the remaining countries, some of them consumed a little less than electricity consumption. China came first among other countries in terms of electricity generated and consumed but it only produced 1.4% more than necessary. Similarly, Russia ranked third in electricity production and consumption. However, it only produced 1.8% more than the electricity consumed. Although some countries produced and consumed the most amount of electricity, its production only exceeded consumption a little.
Nonetheless, despite the smaller amount of electricity generated and consumed, some countries wasted a lot of energy. Take Brazil as an example, it ranked 8th among the countries but left 16.4% of energy unused. Likewise, for India and Canada, which ranked 5th and 6th, they produced a staggering amount of 24% of energy unconsumed.
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- The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, likewise, nonetheless, similarly, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 998.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.87058823529 4.92477711251 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15704298596 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564705882353 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.1788373556 43.030603864 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.7272727273 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4545454545 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145124953989 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663875398592 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462604755365 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109874689315 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464731683126 0.0819641961636 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 61.2550243902 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.47 11.4140731707 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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